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The medical school application process is extremely competitive. The best medical school programs may only enroll 100 applicants out of thousands of applications. Only 40 percent of medical school applicants get even one fat envelope from a medical school.

After you've gotten your grades and taken the MCAT, what can you do? The best and only way you can add the personal touch to your application and emphasize what makes you a standout applicant is to write the best essays you possibly can. Remember, medical school admissions officers are increasingly looking for diverse and interesting entering classes, and candidates whose unique accomplishments and personality will add to their institutions.

And how will they learn that YOU are an asset? You guessed it - through your essays. Whether you've got a raw first draft or you're just giving your final draft an extra look, Vault's editors - from top medical school programs like Johns Hopkins, Michigan and Texas - will enhance the impact of your all-important personal statement and other admissions essays.

Admissions Essay Review

• Send your essay to Vault
• We'll return your essay with detailed commentary and suggested edits within 2 business days
• After further feedback, you'll receive your improved essay

Our expert editors will:

• Level with you - you'll receive honest, thorough feedback
• Help give your essay the personal "hook" that catches admissions officers' eye
• Ensure your individual voice comes through
• Correct your grammar, spelling and word choice
• Sharpen and correct vague, flabby and/or insincere prose and phrases
• Seek out and destroy clich�s
• Make your essay read smoothly and logically

Admissions Passport Are you looking for an admissions coach to guide you through the admissions process for law, MBA and undergraduate programs? Look no further than Vault Admissions Passport. You don't need us to tell you that admission to a top school is incredibly difficult and demanding - and that you're competing against a world full of top applicants. With the Admissions Passport, you'll be guaranteed the following: Unlimited review of your essays and other short-answer items on your application for any given school (two business days) Weekly phone conference with your admissions advisor Anytime access to your admissions advisor via e-mail Unlimited review of your resume and recommendations Don't go it alone on your admissions - getting into a top program and school is one of the best investments you can make in your future. You'll begin with a scheduled phone consultation with your admissions advisor. If you don't have completed essays yet, your advisor will help you outline them. Then, submit your first drafts to your Vault admissions advisor. Your Vault advisor will then work with you and review your essays, short answers, resume, recommendations and anything else needed for your application.